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Monte Williams · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:53 pm Post subject: The Last Thing Firefly Sees

For my upcoming first dio, for which I've written a seven-page script, I took a practice run at an action scene yesterday. Aside from a continuity issue here or there and a moment or three where the action isn't as clear as I'd have liked, I'm pretty happy with it. Let me know what you think.

The Last Thing Firefly Sees

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Hope you enjoyed it.

For context, everything that took place above was photographed in this wee bit of stream:

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Cheers,

-Monte
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Ruki Ren · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 3:25 pm Post subject:

Neat story! I like Heavy Duty holding the rock.

Mmmmm...Cobra Firefly....

AUTOBOT · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:14 pm Post subject:

HA! Firefly got his @$$ handed to him.... That was real cool, man.... I like the part where HD drops his weapon then whips out the knife n takes him down..... nice poses too....! Cool

MacGyver · Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:50 pm Post subject:

Great! Love that last shot!

Ummm...lol...the last shot of your story, that is...Thought I'd clarify...
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Monte Williams · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 2:44 pm Post subject:

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Maximus · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 4:16 pm Post subject:

very cool man! I also really like that shot with HD holding the rock. Keep that cool stuff coming!
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bluestalker88 · Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 4:51 pm Post subject:

awsome shots man they all were just great, I really like the shot when hd is grabing his nife and the ones when hes about to smach firefly with the rock. an the last shot right before firefly closes his eyes(just guessing I think he would) great job

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Ruki Ren · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 2:09 pm Post subject:

HA!! You can't torture me anymore! I have a Cobra F-Fly heading my way.

Probably will get it before Saturday...Hopefully.

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